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Review:IluvJamesPotter says:
Great story, absolutely brilliant. The one thing I would comment on is sometimes your punctuation and such was wrong, which bugged me a bit. I don't know why, but it's a huge pet peeve of mine whenever people use periods instead of question marks. But other than that, I thought it was a great story. I loved the twist with James- I seriously thought that she would end up with him instead of Albus, but your idea of him kissing her then realizing he just liked her like a friend was FABULOUS! Seriously, that was a wonderful plot twist. And I absolutely adored Albus. I want to marry him myself.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. To tell you the truth, for a while she was going to end up with james, but I decided that she was so in love with Albus, that she wouldn't change affections so easily. And I agree, I loved Albus when I was writing him, he seemed so cute in my head.
I am sorry about any punctuations and stuff, i might go over it and fix it up.
Thank you for the lovely review

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