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Review:navyfail says:
Yikes Draco! The ending was intense and important. I think I expected it to happen since in his head he could hear,"Come with me," multiple times. That kind of foreshadows it.

I do like this one-shot. You explored into Draco. Even though we don't know much about the OC like her last name and how they met, I like her and she is a crucial part to this story. One part I enjoyed was the swing part. It flowed into him going back and forth on the chair. Very rhythmic. Another part I liked was the part with her death. You explained it to us what caused it and set up that scene nicely.

My favorite lines would have to be, "Yet, a pain like this, it is worse than any he has ever experienced before. He wants it to stop." The comparison of the pain he felt and the pain he was feeling now was a great touch. It shows how no matter what happens you'll never be ready for pain.

Great one-shot. I enjoyed reading it.
~Sama
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Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked the ending and the way I foreshadowed it.

Its good to know you liked the way I explored into Draco. Yeah, Catherine was an important element in the story, though more symbolic than surreal. I am glad you liked the swing part, and her death, thanks.

I am pleased that you liked the comparison of the past pain and present pain. Indeed, one is never ready for pain.

Thanks so much!


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