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Review:anissamalfoy says:
Hey! Since you've reviewed my story, I thought I would be doing the same too :D

I really love the way you write, how you describe things is just perfect and the flow is nice. You're really a good writer :) As for the characterisation, I should say that you really nailed them, especially with suspicious Harry. Like in this dialogue between Hermione:

"He's always hiding something," Harry mumbled, ignoring her. "Don't you remember--"

"Sixth year; yes, Harry." Hermione rolled her eyes, placing the Object back down. "You told me about him nearly every day that year--but I would know if he had been hiding something."

For some reason, that made me smile :) Anyways, keep up the good work!

-Anissa

Author's Response: Thank you, this was almost too sweet to read! I haven't even finished reviewing your story yet!! (I'm so sorry about it, too. I feel pretty slack).
Thank you very much for your comments. I'm actually going to go back through this another thousand times, so by the end the flow should be perfect. I've been struggling with writers block, so my descriptions can get awfully lengthy and sometimes they don't make sense.
And yes, characterisation - your comment made my day (night, whatever, haha). I've had a lot of out-of-canon fics, so this one I was determined to make sure that didn't happen. I'm glad to see that it read ok to you!
Thank you very much for this review, it was so nice to log on and read. I'll no doubt be reviewing your story very soon :)
Thanks again,
Mahalia


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