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Review:Quinn says:
Hello there, just passing through. I know writers, such as yourself, enjoy a review even if it is a small one (yet I doubt it will be small, I ramble too much when it comes to writing).
I am enjoying the story so far, although there are some blunders to it. For starters, the correct term to Draco's profession is Healer, not Doctor. And Hermione DID went to France on a holiday with her parents once, sometime before her third year (this little detail was given during her fourth year when the trio were introduced with bouillabaisse, a French dish known to the Beauxbatons' students, which was served at the opening feast of the Triwizard Tournament).
Sorry if I sound a bit obsessed; I am a fan girl after all.
Don't take it too harshly, I am enjoying this literacy piece, despite the small (really, really small) errors.
Also, I chuckled heartily at Ron's new nickname, Ronaldo. It is not only very Italian, but a far better nickname than "Won-Won"! I applaud to you on that!
Great job so far! I will keep on reading. I'll try to review the later chapters if I can. Well then, what am I waiting for? Allons-y! (Oh yes, I am a Doctor Who fanatic as well, hehe.)
Cheers! -Quinn

Author's Response: you know what? I totally forgot about the fact that Hermione did go to France with her family. thanks for bringing that to my attention! I might go back and change it, but I'm not sure. I tried to keep everything as canon as possible but sometimes things just slip. as far as doctor/healer, I used those phrases interchangeably out of habit, I think. I appreciate you pointing it out though. a while back someone pointed out that I messed up Hermione's birthday in one chapter and I had to go change it because it was important to the story.

and thank you so much for taking the time to review! I appreciate it and your feedback :) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

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