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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I actually really enjoyed this chapter!

I haven't read a super huge amount of marauders era stories but in those that I have read, never has the creation of the marauders map been mentioned, which I personally see as being a very important, or at least a very big part of the marauders lives at Hpgwarts. But that could just be my opinion.

Anyway, I loved how you went about the creation of the map - if it was me trying to write this chapter, I would be absolutely stumped! But you did it all in such a creative way - I loved how the team put all their heads together to create the map together. It was definitely a team effort! And it was nice to see a little more of Remus and Peter - I actually really like the way you portray them. Both of their character's seem to be quite subtle at the moment, which I kinda like.

Hehe, Sir Cadogan:) You characterized (can I say characterized about a painting?) him really well, and he definitely brought a nice touch of humour to the chapter!

I am guessing this story will go a little AU at some points? Beth, being the fifth marauder, will probably change some certain canon events - like the fact that her name is on the map? Or will her name somehow be erased later on? Hmmm...

Great chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: True story: I totally and completely forgot about the Marauder's Map until really late in the story, and had to write in this chapter two days before my Sunday update to fill the void. Whoops! But it was actually a lot of fun to do, and I managed to write it in, I think, two sittings, so all was well. Maybe a bit rushed? But I am very fond of it, in general, and I definitely think Remus would have been a large part of the brains behind the operation. ;)

Also, just saying that Sir Cadogan should be in WAY more stories than he actually is, because he is absolutely so much fun to write! ♥ One of my favorite minor characters at Hogwarts, actually. And this story is AU for sure, because Beth's a completely new character. What I like to tell people is that I try and keep as canon as possible, except for events Beth directly touches. The map would be one of those. ;)

Thank you for reviewing!


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