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Review:MC_HK says:
I think you've got a good storyline here! I really like your character's personalities. They're very... erm.. colorful. In a good way! I just lacked a better term lol. But your imagery is good, you've got a good flow as well. It's really a pleasure to read.

The only real CC I have is to go back re-read to fix some punctuation problems you have. There's a few places that it feels disjointed because of really short sentences that could be run together.

Great job, and have a nice day!

Look forward to your re-request, MC_HK

Author's Response:
Hi! Aww I'm glad that you think I have a good storyline. Colorful? Well, that is a new way to describe them. :P Surprising that I managed to pull off flow and imagery okay. Those two were the main things I was worried that it went wrong.

I am currently fixing those up. Hopefully it won't take to long for the chapter to be edited.

Thanks for the feedback and CC.

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