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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey, Zayne!

This was AMAZING! I had an inkling that it was Lavender but I couldn't imagine her travelling like she said but then it was just her imagination and just -- wow!

You wrote this so amazingly! I just loved all the descriptions of the places and Lavender's frustration at being a part of the war, it was just beautiful!

I really, really loved this one-shot, it was written so well and I didn't notice any spelling mistakes or grammatical errors, so kudos!

I also loved how you juxtaposed Parvarti and Lavender, I could really see Lavender being like that, especially after the war.

So yeah, I absolutely loved this story! I'm glad that I read it! :)


- Kayla. :D

Author's Response: Hi Kayla! Thank you so much for your lovely review! I'm really pleased you enjoyed this so much and that you could imagine this story so well. I really wanted the reader to be 'in it' alongside Lavender so it actually seems like these places were real and being travelled to. It was so vivid for Lavender that she couldn't even distinguish what was real or not and that's what I wanted for the reader as well. i'm glad you got that. Thanks lovely for the wonderful review!

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