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Review:rozen_maiden says:
Hey, I thought I would review both chapter 2 and 3 together, just in case I missed something :)
The first thing I want to say is: you're a really great writer. Your sentences and words are never out of place, and you describe things really well and in a way that isn't clunky and awkward for people to read. I find it really enjoyable reading how you describe your characters as well - I can picture them effortlessly in my mind.

You portrayal of Draco in this chapter and last were spot on. He has the attitude I expect of him - down to the cowardly hiding to avoid the Malfoy shame (I'm not sure if that was intentional, but it worked well, I found). It doesn't surprise me that his parents had a potential wife in mind for him either. The fact that they still focus heavily on blood status rings real true to the Malfoy image.

Cleo as a character is good. I'm interested to see where you are taking her relationship with the characters you've introduced. I'm imaging you have a million plot bunnies running through your head right now :)

-Mahalia

Author's Response: eee, thank you so much! this really made my day! oh believe me, I do have lots of plots for this story :p

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