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Review:marauderfan says:
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This intrigued me from the start - I've never read anything from Umbridge's point of view before. She is easily my least favourite character in the series (yes, I prefer Voldemort to her!) and I quite liked your interpretations of her musings about how she hates everything. I can clearly see all the prejudice of "half-breeds" and disgust with children that characterises her in OotP, and it's fascinating to see it from her point of view. I was laughing at her descriptions of all the houses (except Slytherin apparently... maybe she didn't mind them?). Oh and the Weasley twins' Umbridge-itis/ puking pastilles making an appearance at the end, I loved that!

The only thing I was wondering is why she hates them so much. I think it'd be cool to have a little background there, like what made her such a (word that rhymes with witch). Did she have a bad experience with a so called half-breed, or was she always that way? Anyway, this was an interesting look into the mind of one of the Potterverse's most odious characters. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R. I am actually working on expanding this story and adding more details. I originally wrote the story for a challenge and could only portray a single emotion. So now that is over I'm revising it and adding more.

I'm glad you were amused by the mess in her mind. It was pretty difficult to conjure up so many horrible things to say (which I guess is good for me huh? LOL!) but it was a great outlet when I was in a sour mood! I hope you come back and read once I add more to the story!

Thanks again!


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