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Review:Haronione says:
Hi Courtney Dark :) I was searching for a marauder fic and stumbled across this one. I had read your Regulus house cup one-shot and thought it was brilliantly written so when I saw your name above this fic I just had to read it, and I have to say I wasn't disappointed :D

Enough rambling and on with the review! I really enjoyed reading this. I found your characterisation of the marauders and Lily to be spot on. I love Remus in this and how you have made him the studious boy we know he was but then being embarrassed about the fact that he is in front of the other marauders. I could really see him being this way. And I loved how James and Sirius were so confident around the girls and in contrast having Remus blush when the object of his affections turns her attention to him. Just fantabulous! I love that word and use it all the time - it's so much better than 'fantastic' - and it really made me smile when the group were discussing the word. Is it really in the dictionary?

As i have said, I really enjoyed reading this, and I love your writing style :) I saw this was written for the 'out of your comfort zone' challenge, can I ask in which way this was out of your comfort zone (sorry only read 1 other of your fics) was it the genre, characters, era? I only ask because I could not tell from reading this first chapter as I felt it was written wonderfully :D

This was a great first chapter and you have left me eager to read on to find out how the four dates go!

Haronione ♥

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