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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Do you know that feeling when you're sitting with your laptop in the sun and every little bit of dust in the world seems to be sticking to your laptop screen? Yep, that's what I'm going through right now (sigh) so I'll make this review nice and quick - sorry for putting you through my me-rant, by the way.

Anyway, so much happened in this chapter that I don't really know how to begin! Esme...hmmm, I'm not sure whether I like her yet or not. She definitely has huge potential as a character and I am looking forward to finding more out about her. Her relationship with Harry is certainly...interesting, to say the least.

I enjoyed the dinner scene, as well. Oh, Ron!

I always enjoy the scenes from Scorpius' point of view and this one was no exception. I particularly liked the line about Scorpius being quite proud of his parenting skills - that me laugh. And Octavia is absolutely adorable!

That poem was really well written - I absolutely suck at things like that! I tried to write a sorting hat song and a short rhyme for one of my stories and failed miserable, so nice work on that!

Oooh, the last scene was great! (I've just now realized that this review is talking about scenes in a complete random order.) I wish I could say something more interesting about it, but my brain is feeling a little confuzzled right now, so I'll just say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter and that Hermys rocks! And sorry for yet another random, waffly, incoherent review.


Author's Response: I have that feeling with the monitor for my desktop computer all the time. It's a little old, so it's not the brightest any more and the room is kind of dusty and the lighting is bad. Suffice it to say, trying to watch a really dark scene in any video is a complete waste of time.

I hope Esme grows on you. She'll be around for a while. She's not a bad person, really, just very blunt and sarcastic and she has quite a grudge against Harry. Why, you may ask? You'll soon find out...

The dinner scene was a blast to write. I'm glad you liked it. Tipsy Ron is probably my favorite PoV to write in the entire HP fandom.

Scorpius is never going to win any Father of the Year awards, but the poor guy does his best. Nothing in his life before Rose prepared him to function while surrounded by so many females packing Weasley genes. It really isn't fair. I'm really glad you like Octavia. She is fairly central to the story.

Augh, the poem! I've recovered from the trauma enough to be able to talk about it coherently now. Suffice it to say that when you write your own poem, you're well advised to put that in your author's notes. Otherwise, there could be... misunderstandings.

Hermys is pretty awesome, isn't he? I love house elves. They're so much fun to have in a story!

Yay! You're into the really heavy action now. Lots of crazy stuff coming soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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