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Review:navyfail says:
Yes, this is indeed a dark twist. This is different from what I usually read and what I usually come across. It was new, fresh, and dark with horror. It kept me on the edge of my seat. Literally.

I like the comparisons of the sisters: the shadowed speck and the golden-haired nymph. The similes and colors you used for imagery and description were lovely. Another thing I notice is how you characterize Teddy in this one-shot. His thoughts on the two sisters and how he puts them into his mind as opposites is intriguing in a way. I always for some reason forget about his wolf-side though.

"She bottled her blood and tipped it into their mouths with a kiss, the drop of Veela poison enough to drive them mad." Wow, talk about intense.

And this line, " Instinct was incurable." I like how you repeated this line throughout. It made that line memorable.

The ending was unexpected and expected at the same time. I don't actually know how to express it in mere words. I guess the only way to put it is memorable. All in all, a beautiful, dark one-shot.

~Sama

Author's Response: Thank you! :) I love folk tales, and as I grew older, the darker interpretations of them. They might be innocent to the six-year-old, but historically, they were pretty gruesome, heh, and all about the basest sides of humanity--and in this case, primal obsession. It's still one of my favorite things that I've written!

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