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Review:navyfail says:
Lavender Brown was most certainly a quite annoying character but a character we still didn't know nonetheless. I really like where you went with this story. The way you worded things and the small details really made this one-shot exquisite.

That dream with picket-fenced house, husband, and daughter was very sweet. When she realized that it couldn't happen, I felt her pain. Everything kept adding up into a pile but yet she didn't fully break. Instead she kept moving on.

What surprised me was that you took the fact that she was a Gryffindor and built on it. You gave us a reason why the sorting hat placed her in that house. And the best part has got to be that you didn't end up changing her character at all. Instead you gave her a background story. Right now Lavender's character is admirable.

Thank you Gina for this lovely piece. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. This is definitely going in my favorites.

10/10
~Sama

Author's Response: It was really fun writing Lavender - her character sort of popped out of nowhere. I remember I felt like writing something 'different' and I had a spare banner. For those few hours, I walked in her shoes, and I finally understood her. Lavender's inner strength could be so mundane in a different point of view, but in her own, framed by her past, it's really quite something. And she doesn't have to be a hero or have a great moment where she overcomes anything; she is admirable for being Lavender :D

♥ thank you for the review!


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