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Review:MrsJaydeMalfoy says:
*Sobs* Kayla!! :( / :) You've got my emotions all confused!!

When I read the first line or two, I thought this was going to go somewhere completely different. But when I read 'pale bed sheets' I remembered that you said you had written a story about Neville's parents remembering their lives, and I immediately thought to myself, "My emotions aren't ready for this!" :P

This was a really beautiful and heart-wrenching piece! I really enjoyed seeing the different adventures that Alice and Frank went on, and I think they flowed seamlessly with the rest of the story. You actually took me to those places, while still gently reminding me that we were actually sitting in the hospital, dreaming.

The way Alice kept getting frustrated with herself for not being able to remember really broke my heart, but I think it was very realistic and you portrayed it very well. And I LOVE that, even though she can't remember, she still realizes that she's got some kind of connection with Neville and Frank.

The ending was bittersweet. I was SO happy that she remembered Neville's name, but I also knew that the remembrance would be short-lived. :(

All in all, this was a beautifully written, heart-wrenching one shot, that was a very unique spin on the "travel" theme. Wonderful job!! ♥

Author's Response: haha, sorry, Jayde! I don't mean to make your emotions all confused! (Totally did but shh...) :p

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was so hard to write (mostly because of the time constraint and the other thousand and million things on my mind :p) so hearing that you loved it really makes me go all warm and fuzzy! :')

Thank you so much for this beautiful review, it really made my day. Thank you! ♥


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