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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Haha, I love how awkward all the conversations between Beth and Severus seem to be! Poor Beth - I certainly know the feeling of wanting to smack myself on the forehead after saying something stupid - I consider myself very talented at saying stupid things in embarrassing situations. I can't stand awkward silences.

ANYWAY, I really love winter and Christmas chapters, too. I think that's partly because over here we have Christmas in the summer and I've never seen the snow, so a white Christmas has always been this big novelty for me! But I'm definitely look forward to seeing what Beth and Sirius (and hopefully Severus!) get up to over the holidays.

Oh, James. Not getting a present for Lily - what a typical guy move! Not that I can talk, as I'm a bit of a present-forgetter myself. I really love your characterization of James, so it was nice to see a little bit more of him this chapter.

Wow, I'm just realizing now that this was a very self-obsessed review, sorry about that. I LOVE YOUR STORY! There, hopefully that balances out my me-rant.


Author's Response: Oh, man, there is so much awkwardness between Beth and Sev. ♥ (Which, by the way, heavily stems from my interactions with most people at all times -- I'm absolutely an expert at screwing up social interaction! Words are so much easier, don't you find?)

It's weird, responding to a Christmas review in the middle of August, but I watched a Supernatural episode about Christmas yesterday... guess I should be used to it. :P Are you Australian, by any chance? I've seen snow -- we have a winter Christmas -- but we never see it ON Christmas!

Ah, James, forgetting to buy his girlfriend a present. ♥ He's actually my favorite Marauder in these books, I think; at any rate, I got very attached to writing his character. Dear boy!

Pfft. That wasn't a self-obsessed review at all! Responses are way more self-interested than reviews tend to be, which is partially why I don't like doing them; I hate talking about myself. But readers do so much for me, responding to their comments is the least I can do! ♥

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