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Review:marauderfan says:
Ooh how much do I love the idea that of all the Weasleys it was Percy's daughter who had to transfer schools for being a rebel? Haha, that's fantastic. :D

I like the way you've written the personalities in this. Molly is a typical teenager - a little whiny, wants to be independent, and gets into trouble, but she still really likes to read and to learn, so I thought you developed her character really well. And Percy as Minister! I like it, and it's great that one of the Weasleys is rich now lol.

I also like how Salem Witches Institute has some "regular" classes. I'd love to see what a magical art class is like!

In your authors note you mentioned the possibility of expanding this later on, and I think that's a cool idea. Personally I'd love to read about what school is like at the Salem Witches Institute because there's very little fanfiction about it (that I'm aware of, anyway). One thing I'd suggest, if you do end up doing that, is to maybe add a little more description. Molly is a new student coming to a new country, I think there'd be an element of awe when she sees her new surroundings.

Anyway, I did really enjoy reading this, you did very well :) Great work!

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