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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi Courtney! I'm so excited about this new story of yours! First off, the feeling of realism is awesome in this. It brought back way too many memories of being late for school and my sisters either wearing my shirts or locking me out of the bathroom and *shudder* haha.

I think it's cool you write about twins. If anyone would be able to understand them, it would be you :P And I really like that you didn't seem to have them disliking one another in this or getting along disgustingly well. They're sisters! they love one another and one day will be best friends, but they can still argue and they seem to have their own personalities.

And now, of course, i'm crossing my fingers that there might be a little something there to discover between Dani and Oliver? Or maybe they don't know it's there yet and we'll watch it develop along the way? Sorry, i can't shush my romantic heart, haha!

This was a really awesome first chapter. It felt realistic, entertaining, and set some of our main players up perfectly so we know who they are but you didn't go into pages of back story. Also, your paragraphs are formatted REALLY well in this! I love that you've decided to stick with the longer ones you were getting into at the end of Missing. This whole story just has a more polished feel to it so far.

Really excited to read the second! hopefully in a few hours after I get some lunch and deal with some work stuff :D!

Author's Response: Hey Jami! It's lovely to see you here:)

My twin sister and I don't usually get on very well, I have to admit. However we certainly don't hate each other (most of the time) and so I definitely think Dani and Kat reflect the two of us in many ways - me being the amazing, cooler twin that everybody likes, obviously.

There may be something there to discover between Oliver and Dani...or there may not...or there may be something there completely unexpected...we'll have to wait and see!

I'm so glad you liked the first chapter! And the paragraphs! I'm quite happy you pointed that out, actually, considering its one of the main things I've thought about for this story. I definitely thing (hopefully) that my writing has improved since the start of Missing!

Thanks again for the lovely review.

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