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Review:alicia and anne says:
I really like your chapter image!

Poor Lucy, feeling so inadequate when compared to her sister and cousins. It must be hard for her as there are so many it's hard to do something that the others haven't done already.

I loved how you portrayed Lucy, she seems like a normal teenager, I love how she's not overly smart or pretty, it makes her seem more real.

I'm glad that Molly is telling Lucy to give herself more credit. I'm also glad that she pushed her to be an actress.

This was very well written and I liked the scene at the end with Molly and Lucy acting like sisters. :D See Lucy, Molly does care! :D

Brilliant!

Author's Response: Awws, thank you! Thank you for the nice comment on my chapter image, although I can't take credit for it.

Yes, poor Lucy. I think it would be hard being a Weasley in the next generation. There are just so many of them. And I didn't want her to be overly smart or pretty, even in her mind, because then there'd be no story really. For this, the whole point was for her to simply be average and angsty. And there was so much angst! I didn't want it to be so angsty when I started writing it, I think that's why I added in the sappy sister time scene, to even it out a bit so readers wouldn't be rolling their eyes forever wondering when she'd stop whining, lol. I really enjoyed writing this though and I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the kind review!

xxEnigmaticEyes16


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