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Review:alicia and anne says:
I'm going to guess that the two people in this story are Pansy and Draco. :D

I felt so sorry for poor Pansy, having her heart broken so badly by the man that she loved.

I really liked how you had her packing her stuff by hand because she liked to think whilst doing it. That mixed with the flashbacks of what happened that night were brilliant. It really got across the sadness of the moment.

It's good to know that even though he doesn't want to be with her he still really cares about her.

Another wonderfully written one shot! :D

Author's Response: You would be correct in your guessing. It is Pansy and Draco. This story was really hard for me to write because at the same time I was sort of going through my own heartbreak, and that had a large effect on this. This story, in general, just also meant a lot to me, so I was constantly adding details and rewording things. I don't remember where I got the packing idea from, but I think I really just wanted to make Pansy human in the reader's eye. A lot of people hate her which makes me feel sorry for her so I try to avoid the cliche.

And I think Draco does still care about her even though he's stopped loving her. At least mine does in this story. Like I said, I really wanted to make them both human, and I wanted to make it clear that this breakup was just something that had to happen, but was in no way something Pansy brought on herself...

Thank you so much for the review! These definitely brightened my day.

xxEnigmaticEyes16


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