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Review:LittleLionGirl says:
My thoughts and opinions? Very, very well done. I like the idea of a Hogwarts paper and I don't know why (and no offence to HuffPuffs) but I can see a Huffle writing something very gossip like such as this. I am kind of hoping to see the craziness and drama-filled chapters that I am sure will follow. I like it but I feel some key information should be given soon such as why it is so significant Aaliyah and Al or Gabby and James should date? What year everyone is in- I mean it sounds fifth/sixth maybe seventh- I just happen like the definite facts personally. The only thing I saw that needs an edit is the Chuddley/Chuddly Cannons are the Chudley Cannons. The characters, plot and flow are off to a strong start. All I can say is maybe add a little more background as you go on. Amazing work PM me when you have more for me to read!
XOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: Omg you think it is well done? thank you. And haha I always found that the Hufflepuffs would be the only ones would could get away with a school newspaper. :P

I do realize that their is some key information missing and I am working on adding it slowly into future chapters. I guess I don't want to badger people with the facts just yet, lol. Thank you for pointing that out though. James and Gabby are in their seventh year while Aaliyah and Albus are in their sixth.

And wow I can't believe I misspelled Chudley Cannons. Will have to go back and fix that. Thanks again for the lovely review.

~Sama


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