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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Sorry, I had to take a break from reviewing because of the House Cup. My beloved Slytherin House came in last and I'm such a sore loser. *mopes & kicks a rock* Anyway, I have finally been able to return to your story.

Prologue/Epilogue... oops. Messed that one up didn't I? LOL! Anyway... I liked everything about this chapter. I loved the memorial wall idea. I think it is quite original and fitting that it be done in such a respectful and magical way.

And I love their new place. It sounds very beautiful and I especially loved his comment, "I'll let you and the bathroom be alone together." XD Hahaha! Very funny!

And I liked how you have this unspoken angst between them already with their little touches and him nearly stumbling over his words just being around her.

Great job,
Dark Whisper

P.S. Yes, of course I remember your lovely request. Honestly you don't have to, but if you feel you must, just say something simple. I'm not picky.

Author's Response: This was my first House Cup so I just kind of watched from a far, just to see what sorts of things were going on and how it all worked and whatnot. :) I can be a sore loser too, we were so close to winning this year for Ravenclaw!

In the more recent chapters, I've kind of forgotten about the memorial wall, but I think I'm going to bring it back in in the next chapter. I really liked the idea of it and then completely forgot about it with the angst I was putting them through! xD

I will definitely give you a great citing because you're one of my favorite authors and inspired what will be a big moment for Draco and Hermione. :)
~MadiMalfoy xx

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