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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
Hi, Elphaba back again!

As with the first chapter, some of the muggle elements you include - like mobile phones - just don't it with the wizard world. Instead of using the phone, Amy could show up in Ciara's flue, or send her a howler. Other muggle elements, like visiting the muggle coffee shop, work just fine.
I like Ciara's commentary about muggle technology that comes later on in the chapter, I just don't know that enough wizards would be able to use cell phones in order to make having them useful - I keep thinking of Ron referring to the "fellytone" in the books.

Ciara's on-air rant about Pitter letting everyone done by not showing up for his interview is pretty funny. Also, big thumbs-up for referencing Umbitch. :)

This chapter raises a lot of questions. So where was James during the interview? And why did he miss it? Does he have a good excuse? How will their families react? And how will he react?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

I wanted to show that after the war, prejudices against muggles should have decreased and that is, what I have tried to show. I have tried to describe that wizards are adjusting to the muggle technology which is really advance and I think it's time the wizardary world advances itself too.

I know Ron used to say fellytone but don't forget he married Hermione, I think she is capable of making him learn the muggle things. Don't forget in epilogue, he was driving a car.

I liked the rant myself. I think it's really good but somewhat stupid of her, to say something like this about a big celebrity. This will have consequences too.

There are lot of questions and they will be answered in the next two chapters.

Hope you review again :)


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