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Review:harrietm says:
I really like the idea behind this story and your writing style :) You're particularly good at closing the chapters in a way that makes me want to read another one *hint, hint, nudge, nudge*
One slight criticism is that there wasn't really any anger or angst regarding their initial break up, which I guess I figured would be mixed up with all the other feelings James and Vi are feeling, and maybe wasn't expressed :)
P.S I like your review theory. Wish people really did that!

Author's Response: Awh thank you for all the support! I really appreciate it. I know I don't update as much as I should, but in my defense, my computer has been out of commission for two months and I've been having to use my husband's yucky one! Anyways to respond to your constructive criticism, the anger kind of passed already. 8ish years later and neither is quite sure what really happened to break them up so its more confusion when they see each other again than anger, really. But more emotions will stir up, I promise you that!

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