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Review:APerkins says:
Yup. Everything I just said. Proven wrong. Starting to get to know Hastings now. A little anyway. I actually think it was the fact that you were so good at the group conversations (a skill that really impressed me too)

I wonder if it neglected the one-on-one situations where we get to know the main character a little better, and the times of reflection where we get to see what she is thinking.
Either way, in terms of writing style, little to criticise, Im enjoying reading it, it is well written.

I liked the interaction between Remus and Hastings too - Particularly their comparing notes on various pranks! Will keep reading and reviewing, but now time for bed!

Author's Response: Oh good, I'm glad she's starting to seem like a better character now. But after reading your reviews I think I'll go back and try to add some more of what she's thinking in the first couple of chapters.

And thanks, I'm glad the characters' interactions were fun to read!

Again, I really appreciate your reviews!! Thank you so much for reading!


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