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Review:Courtney Dark says:
My eyes are drooping and I really should be asleep right now, so I'll make this review short and snappy.

Loved this chapter! It had so many great moments. You manage to write the little things, like James' apology to Beth so incredibly well. Everything about this story is just so exciting and fun to read and makes me want to keep coming back for more and to find out what's going to happen next!

Anyway, my favourite part of this chapter would definitely have to be the conversation (definitely a little awkward, which I love) between Beth and Severus - it's kinda adorable that they share a secret! But I can't help being suspicious about that owl just coincidentally delivering the letter to Severus...or maybe, like Beth, I'm just overthinking things!

Yet another awesome chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: You silly, reading this story until your eyes droop. ♥ Is it weird that that makes me really happy? (Probably.)

One of the things I personally love best about this trilogy is that there are little things that go along with the big story -- small sideplots, if you will -- and I tried to make them as important, in their own moments, as the overall arc of the story. So thank you for pointing that out! :)

Aaand more awkward Beth/Severus conversations ensue! This is their first secret of several down the road, I can assure you. I will say that you probably don't have to be too suspicious of that poor owl. It's mostly just lost and confused, somewhat like Errol. Or maybe it just wanted to play matchmaker? *furiously avoids writing a one-shot from the point of view of that owl*

Thank you (again) for your reviews! I just... cannot get over them. Ever. They are so fab. ♥


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