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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Wow, I'm enjoying this story so much that I just realized I didn't leave a review on the last chapter. Sorry about that!

The plot is really starting to thicken now and all the mystery is getting very exciting. I think I'll quickly name my favourite moments of the last two chapters before moving on to the next:

Harry using the Polyjuice Potion to disguise himself as a maintenance worker and steal that file was great - although for some reason I really, really don't like that Dynt woman, especially because she seems to be meddling with Percy and Audrey! And she also seems a little too suspicious for my liking. But anyway, I loved Hermione's reaction when Ron informed her that Harry had gotten hold of the file in a way that wasn't quite legal.

I also loved Harry's message at the Quidditch game - perfection!

Luna! I'm so glad you managed to incorporate her in this chapter, because she is always so fun to read about - and I think you wrote her perfectly, which I know (from failed experience) is a very difficult thing to do. I loved her story about those dragon mites - definitely very in-character. And it was great to see her out-of-the box perspective helped/confused Ron and Harry and Hermione even more!

Still officially creeped out by Lady Ten...I'm just going to call her Lady T because I can never remember if it's Tenabra or Tenebra.

Great chapters!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Ha! Don't worry about it. No big deal.

I really enjoyed the cloak and dagger scene with Harry impersonating the maintenance worker. It was fun to write and I thought it showed just how adept the Aurors are at getting into places they're not supposed to be.

I felt like I was making Harry a bit immature at the Quidditch game, but it was fun and I think it helped to keep him in character a bit.

One of my great regrets is that I didn't find more opportunities to work Luna into this story. She's so much fun to write, but also very challenging. So I tried to make the most of the few opportunities I found.

Lady Tenabra will probably continue to creep you out. She's quite a piece of work.

Thanks again!
-Dan


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