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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here with your review that's really late. I've been very busy with real life, and that's unfortunate because it means you had to wait for this review. I'm sorry. I hope I can make up for that! :)

Well, this is a very different Harry/Ginny story than the ones I usually see! There's a lot of... Tension, and I'm not sure if it's going to make them stronger or tear them apart. You've left me in a lot of suspense!

I love the way that you started off each little vignette with the year. That kind of parallel fashion is really intriguing, and it really helped me get a feel for the time that each scene was happening in. I was also intrigued by the fact that the houses keep getting bigger as the years go by--is that just because they saved up enough money to move, or was the original house magically enlarged?

I have so many questions from just this little prologue: Does Teddy live with the Potters? Is the Auror job the only thing putting strain on Harry and Ginny's relationship, or are there other things? Did James get better? Where was he injured? Why does Ginny feel the need to blame Harry when it so obviously wasn't his fault? What is going on?!?! I love that you've put me into such a state of confusion, because it'll take the rest of the chapters to de-confusify me. :)

I really have no constructive criticism for this chapter. You've woven a great beginning, which is AWESOME, and you've ensured that grammar, spelling, sentence structure, and style are all impeccable. Marvelous job! I look forward to reading more in the future!

May your pen never run out of ink!

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D. I'm really glad you liked this. I don't mind having to wait, it's really fine. As for the questions: Teddy does live with the Potters, because Andromeda died when he was young. They had enough money to move up, because Harry's job started paying more and he started spending more time at work, and less time with family (sorry if I did not make the very obvious in the chapter). James fell off a broom and broke his arms and leg, and he got better. As for the Harry/Ginny relationship thing, you'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)

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