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Review:MC_HK says:
Hellooo :)

This review is going to be rather short, and I'm sorry if you were expecting something rather lengthy. You don't have many mistakes for me to comment on or you need to fix.

I really love your characters. They have wonderful, bold personalities that make this easy to read. The interaction between them is also awesome, as you have very witty banter that is very easy to read through. Your imagery is also wonderful, as you do a good job painting a picture for the reader with your words.

I like the style of your writing. You use your italics in the right places (well, as far as when I read it they are in the right places lol) and to me that helps me give more of a voice to your characters, as you can depict their tone.

Overall, you've got a good, solid chapter. You're awesome :) MC_HK

Author's Response: Awww :) It means a lot to me that you like my characters, I'm so thrilled to hear that! It reassures me that I'm not writing a bunch of marysues :P (To be honest, I think canon characters are harder to write than my OC's, just because I'm trying to keep them the way JKR intended them.)

And thanks for your comments about the imagery! It's such a wonderful compliment to hear that you like my writing style. Thanks for this lovely review :)

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