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Review:Ms Longbottom says:
Yes, yes, and yes! I LOVE the story! I had been thinking about doing Hermione's point of veiw at Hogwarts for a story, too! One thing I would change, though, would be te mood. I don't feel Hermione's exitment. I want, no, NEED to feel like I'm there with her! Other than that, it is perfect! I love! Keep up the good work!
-Ms Longbottom
p.s. do you have a pottermore account? If you do, what house are you in, and what is your name? I'm a Ravenclaw, and my name is JinxLumos4276! I'll add you! :)

Author's Response: I'll have to give that a shot, adding more excitement and whatnot from Hermione's eyes, because you're right, she would beyond ecstatic. Thank you so much for leaving such a wonderful review AND giving me constructive criticism, it really does mean a lot! :)
I've added you on Pottermore! I'm JinxMarauder12183 :) Feel free to duel me. ;P

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