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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Wow, I am more confused than ever now - and I love it! That whole ruse with the Magical Me book (at least I think it's a ruse) was extremely clever - I have to admit, I found it quite amusing that Flint seemed so self-satisfied after he'd found 'the journal' (which I'm guessing doesn't actually exist? Or maybe it does and Lady Tenebra just wanted to through everyone off the trail...I really have no idea) and then, shortly afterwards, was outwitted and killed. Lady Tenebra is one nasty woman!

I LOVED the Weasley dinner scene, because the Weasley's are just the best family in the world and I always enjoy reading about them. I think my favourite parts would have to be the Quidditch match, with James and Al being super competitive with each other - I could just imagine two full grown men bickering like teenagers - and George's speech, which I think you wrote perfectly, especially since a lot of time has passed since Fred's death.

Aw, Harry! I really liked his conversation with Rose, too - the two of them definitely seem to have a close bond.

Great chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi!

I promise that things start to get more clear rather than less clear pretty soon. The mission to retrieve Magical Me from Malfoy Manor was indeed a ruse. But to what end? Eliminating Flint was certainly on Lady Tenabra's short list to things to do, but it wasn't the only objective.

I'm really glad you liked the family dinner. I gave a lot of thought to either cutting it much shorter or taking it out entirely. I was worried it would make the chapter drag. I guess everyone can use a break from the action from time to time.

I imagine Harry and Rose being very close. She's sort of a combination of her mother and father, who are Harry's two closest friends in the world. So it made sense that the two of them would get along really well.

Thanks again for all the lovely reviews!
-Dan


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