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Review:Rachel Payne says:
Dun dun dun. Can I just say that I think it is totally wrong of Scorpius to be jealous?

1. He seems to have no intention of marrying Rose any time soon, and he even said he was distancing himself. I've also noticed that whenever Rose says "I love you" to him he doesn't respond with, "love you too" he says something along the lines of mocking agreement. But he still never says it.

2. The fact that he is distancing himself from Rose and then has the nerve to become jealous or annoyed when she is absolutely never going to cheat is just. blegh. It makes ME mad just thinking about it, and this is a fictional story!

Obviously you have something brilliant planned for the couple, and it feels like it might just be a big fight. Especially when Scorpius finds out that Rose was dropping the eaves. Again. (usually that is something I would associate more with a Slytherin)

I'm also looking forward to finding out what Narcissa Malfoy really thinks of Rose, because that is something else that needs resolving in their relationship.

Dramas aside, the characters and plot are developing nicely, and great chapter name, it really is a bad habit. You always seem to come up with fitting and proper chapter names. It is a gift considering that a lot of authors find it so difficult that they don't even really try.

(ex. one story I love, the chapter names are things like, "shatter", "crumble", "gold", etc. I'm sure it makes sense to the author, but as the reader I have a little trouble finding the purpose behind the names sometimes. With your writing I never do.

I hope you update again soon, you said that you were going to aim for once a week and it has almost been a week since your last update. Looking forward to it!

Best of luck with the writing
-Rachel

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad to see this review! I think a lot of people have just automatically been taking Scorpius's side in this whole thing, which isn't really what I intended. Yes, there are things Rose could be doing better, but he's definitely playing his own role in their issues.

I was intending to update once a week, but school has (unfortunately) taken up most of my time - more than I was expecting. I have been working on the next chapter, though, and hopefully I'll have it up soon.

Thank you so much for the review! :)


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