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Review:alicia and anne says:
Oh Victoire, don't keep this a secret from Teddy! It's a creepy house! He needs to know that you felt a push.

It's good that she's not going to let the ghosts stop her from being in her house. I'd be pretty scared and would be hiding outside or very far away!

I love that Teddy's first reaction to being woken up is, "I didn't do it." and them trying to make the other go and investigate the noise! :P

. I bet he didn't leave the TV on. it's ghosts! I'm scared! What's going on in Ryan's room? I wonder what he's seeing!

Oh Nicky, he doesn't want to go in that house I hope that he doesn't have to, I hope that Nicky's ghost person will tell him what's happening.

Kieron's apartment sounds impressive! He's got a great dad!

It's a poltergeist? That's scary... why can't it be like Peeves? Ahhh the Reapers! :D

Haha Cassie throwing the book at Kieron and him yelling at thin air is hilarious! :P

Kieron? Not being a lovely person? NEVER! :P

Oh Nicky! *hugs him tightly, but away from Kieron's reach incase he becomes jealous* I don't want him going crazy over this all. :-(


I loved this chapter! And I'm so excited to read more! Such a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next and if they'll be able to get rid of the poltergeist before it hurts someone too badly and before Nicky goes crazy.

Author's Response: He really does, but she doesn't want to admit that Nicky's ghosts aren't just scary stories. They always made her afraid.

"I didn't do it" is definitely the thing to do when you're prone to doing reckless and fun things that annoy and freak out your very sensible wife. :P

No, he definitely didn't. What is Ryan seeing, I wonder? *thinks*

Oh, Nicky really doesn't. *hugs Nicky*

He has an awesome dad. :P

Peeves is a different type of Poltergeist. And yes, the Reapers!

Haha, I'm glad you liked that bit. It was fun to write.

:P Kieron is awesome!

Me neither. ;( Good idea, moving him away. ;)

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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