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Review:Rachel Payne says:
And after that mess, I have the distinct feeling that Avery's poor date isn't going to be much interested in her anymore.

Nice touch adding in the threat though, really does serve to round out the story and help move the plot along.

I hope to see more romantic-ish scenes between Avery and James in the future, because after all that is obviously where this story is headed. Among other things anyways.

I hope you update with many new chapters very soon, so that your faithful readers can follow along! Can't wait to read more.

Best of luck with the writing

Author's Response: hahaha yeah I know, I'm planning of making Dylan show up in other parts of the story later on. And thanks for the idea! Might use that! And I'm gonna update this story son (I hope, if my poopy laptop doesn't delete my work AGAIN)

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