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Review:Rachel Payne says:
This was a rather short chapter, kind of disappointing actually, but what can I expect, the poor girl passed out after she was attacked. In most the thoughts and comments and ESPECIALLY the actions in this chapter are very fleeting and they jump around quite a bit. It gets to be kind of confusing because there is almost no noticeable time lapse in the story, and really doesn't do much for the development of the story, OR your skills as an author.

Still all my perfectionist comments aside, this is an awesome story and I cannot wait until I can read more.

Best of luck with the writing

Author's Response: I'll try my best to make this one better... and longer...

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