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Review:Rachel Payne says:
First of all I would like to say that this chapter shows a magnificent improvement to the short and fleeting descriptions of Bri's surroundings. It also shows her thoughts and other people's reactions which are very important things in developing characters and relationships between characters.

Second, you have still kept it up with the humor, even if this is more of a filler chapter, it did serve the purpose of furthering the plot. Some filler chapters I have read are just -- blechh. Don't even get me started.

Is it just me or does Dominique have something sinister planned? I also think that Fred and Les should talk to each other soon otherwise it will seem like it is just odd. I hope you update again soon so that I can read the next chapter and find out what all happens!

Best of luck with the writing
-Rachel

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you saw an improvement. I was actually not a fan of this chapter because I felt like it was all over the place but i'm glad you think otherwise.

Thank you, once again! I try to keep up with humor but I don't want to put it in too much so I've been trying to pick the right times.

Dominique for sure has something planned! Sinister? I'm not so sure about that - we'll have to stay and watch! Something shall happen with Leslie and Fred /very/ soon so no worries. I'll be updating very soon.

Thank you!
- Lex xx


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