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Review:navyfail says:
Finally I have got the time to read and review this. Sorry for the delay. First off, your description of the climate is lovely. I can visualize myself in that climate and feeling that same things Scorpius is feeling. It is quite obvious that you have taken the time to do your research about Cairo. Not all people worry about getting their facts right so thank you.

Another thing is that I liked reading in Scorpius's point of view. It is a fresh, new change from reading in Rose's point of view.

Acanthus does sound interesting. The history you added in this chapter was intriguing. I did not expect Dalila's grandfather to be going on their adventure. I have a feeling he won't make it but we'll see.

Great chapter.
~Sama

Author's Response: Hi Sama! Don't worry about how long it takes, I'm just happy that you're enjoying it!

I'm glad that you thought the setting was good, because I had a lot of fun writing it. I really like exploring other cultures and cities so it really wasn't a problem research wise, I think I may have had a little too much fun writing it!

I enjoyed writing from Scorpius' POV too, because it was fun to mix it up and you should expect different POVs throughout this too!

I'm glad that you found the history intriguing as it was fun to write. As for Rashidi you'll have to wait and see what happens to him!

Thanks for another great review!

-Kiana


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