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Review:MissMdsty says:
Another brilliant chapter! I love it when you talk sports to me! :D

Let's take it one thing at a time! I'm anxious about Moody's plan about getting the Aurors to identify the mole! The part where Dumbledore thinks about what these kids are getting themselves into, that made me tear up, especially the part about them being brave as lions, but children none the less! This is something I've noticed in your writing, and it's something that your Marauder story has in common with the canon books, is those little bits and pieces that remind the reader that there is still a war out these, and people are dying and they will be forced to take up arms sooner rather than later!

Lily's attitude is very fitting of the whole ordeal she had to go through. She is still frail but you can tell she is trying to stay strong and enjoy what time she has left in school and that is amazing to see! I love how she is such a strong role model and is still a woman, with her own weak spots and her hesitations!

I just love when they make plans to move in and start their life, it's very bittersweet, because by this point I've already grown so attached to these characters, even though I know how they end up! You write these chapters and these stories, for Sirius and Belle, Lily, James, the whole group, that you make me just want to live in the moment with them and deal with stuff when it comes up!

This was a chapter so filled with emotions, since we are entering the "lasts" portion of their education. Last match, last Cup, last exams. That just makes me sad, but in a good way. That sounds strange! Amazing chapter my dear! *hearts*

Author's Response: Hi darling!!!

It's so sad thinking about how young they all are getting into this war, isn't it? I hate that they ha to sacrifice so much and saw such little improvement. But that's why there story is so tragic, I suppose.

I"m so excited that you think Lily is a strong role model with her own weak spots. I want her to be real, if that makes sense.

I wish I could say that I'm sorry it's bittersweet, but I'm still so happy that you love the characters that I can't be sorry! haha!

Ugh Ral, how do I even thank you for all the awesome review you leave? You turn me to puddles, puddles that want to hug you ♥


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