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Review:marauderfan says:
Can you tell I got bored so I decided to stalk your author page. You're a boss at angsty romance and death, but you're also really great at parody and satire! I loved this - especially how you made fun of so many fanfiction cliches in there (and things that didn't make sense in the books, like the fact that Lupin never spoke to harry until he was 13, despite being best friends with Harry's parents!)

And the vampire love triangle. That was hilarious! I take it Narcissa was supposed to be Bella? I only ever read the first 30 pages of Twilight and from what I can tell, Narcissa/Bella in this isn't even exaggerated, she's the same as Bella from Twilight. :P This was totally hilarious. Also, really apt description of Snape in there, he does look like an oversized eel.

Also... I don't have any idea what Teddy's middle name is! (And I didn't know Lily's middle name was Luna either, does that make me a bad fan? haha) Anyway, I'm really glad I read this - I have no idea why you said to expect poor humour because it was fabulous. Great job!

Author's Response: Hello again! Haha, I'm glad you liked this strange little concoction of mine and didn't think it was totally crazy! I'm glad the attempt at satire worked out! :) Haha, yes I thought there were some things which didn't work in the books which could be addressed, and making fun of the fan fiction cliches we all know and love is always fun.

Haha, I'm so glad you appreciated the vampire and Twilight references! Somehow I knew I couldn't write a parody about poor Remus without some vampire/werewolf humour. I'm glad I did Bella, er, justice? She's like the perfect Mary-Sue after all, and too much fun to parody. Haha, I'm pleased you noticed the Snape references as well! :P

I'm so glad you liked this and getting this feedback was so wonderful. I had a blast writing this so knowing you enjoyed it was great. Thanks so much for leaving me this great review! :D

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