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Review:house elf says:
Aloha!

First off, I like the new summary :) I liked the old one (I think - I can't really remember it now...I hope I'm not making this up), but this one works too ;) Especially since, like, at the end of the day she is the one who has to save herself. And she doesn't even realise. But she's in the process of doing that right now.

Yay for new chapters! I really really liked this one. Obvs. It's so sad how Rose still thinks she's 'fat, and insignificant, and worthless' but I guess it's realistic. Recovery's not exactly gonna happen overnight, is it?

Hermione seemed quite cold and harsh to me. Kind of business-like about the whole thing. I don't know, maybe that's what Rose needs, like Teddy said? :/

Still, she has really great people around her like Teddy and Scorpius. Speaking of, I think he's letting her have her space. Like how he didn't follow her on her walk, or go to her in her room when she obviously wanted to be alone. Oh, and it's so sweet how he looked after Lucy. Isn't he lurrrvely?

Looking forward sehr much to the next one! :D

Author's Response: Hello der!

I liked the old one too, but I couldn't help but think that it didn't quite portray the seriousness of the story. I'd hate for an unsuspecting little one to click on it, expecting a love story, and have to read about anorexix tendencies and whatnot!

I reckon that something in Rose's mind will always think that she's fat and worthless. Cute boys should help her, though (and councelling).

Hermione is still kind of dealing with the shock of everything. I guess that I wouldn't know how to react to my (nonexistant) daughter's nonexistant eating disorder.

Okie dokie artichokie, I'm off to write the next chapter! See you there :)


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