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Review:DancingMooncalf says:
Haha, I still grinning! Okay, so here is your review:

What made me laugh immediately was the switch from the fairy tale introduction to the reality. How unbelievably delightful and true! I couldn't wait to read the rest once I had read that bit!

I found this to be a very cute story, but also rather funny. I can see it was meant as a parody, there's a certain hidden irony in it that is only really refiled at the beginning and the end. It makes it a strong parody.
It was very obvious that the ring would be in the turkey, but it was fun non the less.

I think for a parody the characters were perfect, really shallow and unbelievably confident. If it was a real story that would be strange, but it adds up to the fun and plays the story nicely.

hope you liked my review!

Author's Response: I'm grinning too now :)
Hey Maya! First of all I must apologize for this late reply. Life tends to get in the way every now and then.

It makes your heart swell when someone tells you that they enjoyed every part of your story. I'm glad I had you from the start. I'm also pleased that you think that all the elements of a parody are in my story. I did put in some thought to make sure that the plot and characterization were okay. So, this really means a lot!
Thanks a bunch :)

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