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Review:patronus_charm says:
Aw this one-shot really made me all teary and have a ton of fuzzy feelings! I really need to stop reading stories about the next gen children being born because they make me cry way too much!

The backstory you provided for how George and Angelina got together was really lovely. ♥ I imagined that George would become a bit of a hermit after the death of Fred so it was nice to see it happen in your portrayal of him, though obviously not nice for George himself! My heart really grieved for him at that point.

I loved the way Molly just kind of blustered into his life and forced him outside and into the real world. It made me chuckle a little to see that he was having to go out against his will! The idea of the ball though was a nice touch, and the fact that George still had a bit of rebel inside of him was really nice. Of course they would have to bond over his pranking ways!

Another which I thought was really good was how you set the scene for Fredís birth with it all being calm in the hospital and both of them sleeping. It made me chuckle a little because I always imagined that Fred II would be the person most far from it out of all of them!

Georgeís thoughts about the baby looking like him and Fred were so sweet. Then when he started talking to Fred and apologising for stealing Angelia it really made me tear up. I think they would have both been great uncles to each otherís children and for that to be taken from them was just cruel. It was nice to see that the birth of Fred was almost helping him overcome the pain of the other Fredís death.

The poo firework going off at the end was a really nice touch. It related back to what I just mentioned and made me laugh. I thought this was a really lovely one-shot!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hello again Kiana! Can I just start by saying how lovely your reviews are! They always make me smile :)

I'm glad George and Angelinas getting together was how you imagined, it's always the way that I thought too. I think she would have been really good for him.

Molly really is a force of nature isn't she? I love how even as adults her children have a fear o her, she's just such an amazing mum and I think the only one who could convince George to go to the ball.

I agree about them being great Uncle's and it always makes me sad that JKR killed Fred off, something I'm still not okay with!

I'm glad you liked this, it's one of my earlier stories and probably needs some editing but I loved writing it :D

Thanks for the review!


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