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Review:marauderfan says:
I like Emily so far - I laughed when she got distracted by the Hufflepuff boy! And I like that she's not super codependent, and doesn't go running back into Scorpius's arms when he says he wants her back. But I hope they can be friends at least, and that she eventually forgives him for being rude to her.

I noticed that in this chapter at least, you kind of skim over most of the action. There's about 2 lines of her charms class, 3 lines of her in the library... I don't know if that intentional, to just skim over the mundane events of the day, but personally I think it'd be nice to add a bit more description in there. What were they learning in Charms? (Hogwarts is a school after all) What does she spend time on during the day?

Anyway, that CC aside, this was a good chapter! You're doing very well so far :)

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