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Review:MissMoneypenny says:
Hi!

I really like the story so far; most next-gens are all fluffy little Gryffindor stories about how perfect life is, so this was really refreshing! (Not that I don't like fluffy Gryffindor stories).

I love Jordan. She's what we British like to call 'badarse'. I love her Slytherinness as well, I'm totally rooting for the Slytherins here.

James is gorgeous. And irritating. I think you should give Jordan the upper hand here, seeing as she's the 'conniving little Slytherin' and everything.

Next chapter... Ellie. Love potion. Rose and Scorpius. Can't wait. Update soon!

~MissMoneypenny

Author's Response: HELLO!!

And I agree which I why I wanted to change it up a bit with a little bit of Slytherins in the mix.

I love Jordan too. She's honestly so much fun to write and definitely probably my favorite OC to write and I'd say, for me at least, the most relatable in a way.

And agreed, once again. I adore James but want to punch him in the face at the same time.

I'll hopefully get the next chapter done soon but I'm taking some college classes this summer and that takes up A LOT of my time.

Thanks so much for reviewing! xx


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