Our website is made possible by displaying online advertisements to our visitors.
Please consider supporting us by disabling your ad blocker.





Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:marauderfan says:
Ok, I'm back again as promised! Sorry it took so long - my brain was all melty after so much house cup reviewing ;)

This was a great chapter! Sometimes filler chapters are necessary, so don't worry that not much happened. In real life there isn't huge drama every day, so it makes it realistic :)

I really liked this bit, for some reason, where you captured 3 characters personalities so perfectly in just 4 lines:

"Wow, congratulations!" Harry felt a bit awkward. He didn't know if he should pat her shoulder or maybe shake her hand, but he settled for just an encouraging smile.

"Of course Ginny is interested!" Mrs Weasley said. "It would be nice to see at least one of my children graduating." She ignored Ron's muttering: "What about Bill, Charlie and Percy?" and turned her attention to McGonnagall.


I think that's exactly how Harry would feel. Harry can be awkward sometimes, and I love it. XD And then Mrs Weasley, speaking for Ginny as if she knows best what her daughter wants (Without asking Ginny of course). And then Ron grumbling about his successful, role-model older brothers. Again, this is such a short passage but everyone is SO perfectly in character. I don't know, its a really random moment, but I love it.

I'm interested to see what Hogwarts is like without Harry and Ron there. It must be so weird for Hermione.

Great chapter and I'm off to read the next one!

Author's Response: Hi! There's no need to apologize, I am just really happy to see you back :D

I am so glad that you liked this chapter despite my worries, haha :) You're right - there can't be drama going on all the time!

Well, I am really happy that you liked the characterization in those few lines! That's amazing. And you're right, Harry's awkward side is just brilliant! And Mrs Weasley is being Mrs Weasley, I suppose ;) I always found it amusing how Ron was a little bitter over his brothers' success (even now that he's one of the three people who saved the wizarding world) ;) I'm so glad that you pointed this little section out to me :D

Thank you so much for your review, I'm going to go and read the next ones now!! :D


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 977
Submit Report: