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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hi! I'm here with that review you requested agggeeesss ago. I'm really sorry for the delay--I've been stuck in the real world for a little too long. :)

This was such a wonderful one-shot. I really loved seeing the events from Peter's perspective, especially since he doesn't show up much in fanfiction. I thought it was really brilliant how you wrote him into certain situations, and it fit his character like a glove!

The shop scene was AMAZING. I certainly wish that I had your seemingly-effortless powers of description. While Peter was in the shop, I could see the room vividly. Gibbon was a very nice addition to the Death Eaters in this story, because he was basically the beginning of Peter's turn to the dark side. I've never really seen Peter's moment of betrayal written out, nor have I seen the moment when James and Lily made Peter their Secret Keeper. It was so awesome to read all of that in this story, from Peter's point of view, because the freedoms that you can take with him are almost limitless! He's the ignored, the underappreciated, and the fact that you gave him a story and a voice is just so marvelous and also, very, very sad.

Your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure were all quite impeccable, by the way. I go nuts for stories that are so perfect like this one is. :)

I love your writing style! This one-shot definitely gets a 10/10! :D

~UnluckyStar57

Author's Response: No worries on the delay, I understand that people have real lives outside of HPFF! :P

Thank you so much, this was such a lovely review! I'm still grinning as I write this response. I really appreciate your comments about my descriptions, it's so good to hear you think they were amazing! And I'm glad you liked the way I wrote Peter's character. He was in a messy situation and I always felt like it couldn't have been an easy and quick thing for him to switch sides, so there was a lot going on in his mind there.

Thanks once again for your kind review!!


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