Oh, Hugo. Personally, I think he'd make a cool vampire and I'm very excited to watch as he adapts to a new world that he's now a part of. I love how you portray vampires, your own spin on "classic" traits - the speed, the eyes, the hunger. I can't wait to see more about your version of vampires and how Hugo, along with Lucy and the others, will deal with it all.
The idea of them needing a coven and a leader is really cool, I can't wait to see the rest. I can definitely imagine vampires needing someone/something (and I can talk about vampire headcanon all day, so I'm gonna shush. :P)
Lucy, you liar! :O I understand why she'd lie, it'd be horrible to have to admit that you basically murdered your cousin. I wouldn't want to do that. I hope she does tell him soon, before his memories come back... if they do come back, that is.
I like Jeremiah, he seems like a good guy. So far. What with helping Lucy and now being there with Hugo. I look forward to finding more about him.
Claudine is really... I'm not sure I like her. In that, she seems like villain material. But she sounds like an awesome character. I just hope she doesn't hurt Lucy and Hugo (if she lives through the slayer attack... which I imagine she will because she's in the summary).
I'm kind of sad that Sandra died. She seemed like an asset to the coven.
Alexis. Hugo's girlfriend, I assume? Love that her last name is Longbottom. Was so not expecting the slayer to be Neville's, I'm very intrigued and excited!
This chapter was so amazing, I enjoyed every minute of it and I can't wait for more!
Thank you for the dedication, I'm honored. I'm so happy you decided to make this longer. :D
Author's Response: Sam! ♥
Indeed, Hugo will make a fantastic addition to the coven - although the others won't realize it at first. I'm glad that you like my vampire headcanon, since it comes from several shows / books / movies all mixed up into one brain :')
NO! NO! I'll be happy to discuss vampire headcanon with you! XD Just PM or email me and I'll happily chat all day :D
Lucy /is/ in a difficult position, but she's also a complicated character. On one hand she loves Hugo, but on the other she's a little crazy, so it's hard to predict her actions sometimes, even for me. :3
You'll see a little more depth to Jeremiah in the next chapter. ;)
And Claudine is my favourite XD But I'd recommend you re-read the final section because I think there was a little hint to her character that you might have missed ;)
Sandra was an asset to the coven, yes, but she had to die. You'll find out why in the next couple of chapters ;) And yes, Alexis is Neville's daughter and Hugo's girlfriend.
I'm happy that you enjoyed this chapter and that it intrigued you! :D