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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Oh, my you made me laugh several times in this chapter. It's awesome that he has a grand plan to make her 'fall in love' with him. That should be quite the challenge, I'm sure.

Can I say that I loved him saying, "The one and only." Isn't that so true? There's only one Draco Malfoy and he is awesome. LOL! And I love it when he asked if she'd kissed Weasel to satisfy him. Such a snide instigator.

McGonagall sure was being polite when she called their relationship "difficult." Hehe. Indeed.

I'm glad he rushed his explanation in not giving her any room to protest. And well, it was nice to see both of them trying to make some sort of amends and actually get along. We'll see how long it can last before a fight ensues.

And she touched him. I wonder what he thought of that exactly? Good start, Madi Malfoy.

I shall read on...
Dark Whisper

Author's Response: When I first started writing this back in October (gahh almost a year ago!), I was new to the whole idea of fan fiction and my writing skills weren't very developed at the time, so I've definitely improved since then. This began as more of a fluffy piece, but I didn't like it so I've changed it drastically, but I've sprinkled humorous parts in there because not everything has to be dark and gloomy.

Draco is the easiest character for me to get into, writing-wise, I feel, which is rather odd since I personally identify with Hermione and Luna more. It was fun writing those lines of his because I really got to develop him a little more away from canon that way.
~MadiMalfoy xx

P.S.-- Remember that long time ago when I asked you if I could source your tango one-shot? Well, it so happens I've finally almost reached that point in the story! After a wide detour and a few roundabouts, it should come up in the next couple of chapters. How would you like me to cite you and your amazing story? :)

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