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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Madi Malfoy,

Yum, mint chocolate chip ice cream... yum. And oh, she's reading "Romeo and Juliet?" Awe, she would do that for the fifteenth time. LOL! I do hope you mention it in future chapters. And he is watching from a distance, watching a tear fall?

You really set this one up really well. I can totally see it. And it is wonderful that she was instrumental in helping him with his trial so that he could return to school. It really says something about her character and he of course, recognizes this.

And I think it is great that he comforted her so long ago. And really, isn't it strange that sometimes saying one's first name is so personal? To them, it really does mean a lot and it is funny that he is thinking something is wrong with him. :)

And oh my, you just gave every Dramione shipper a dream moment. They kissed... and he liked it. :)

Great epilogue, Madi!

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Dark Whisper,

You are correct! I do mention Romeo and Juliet in the future chapters, and multiple times at that! I always felt that Hermione would help him out a lot anyway with his Death Eater trial, not because of Dramione, but because of the goodness of her heart and the fact she would've hated to put her own schoolmate behind bars for something he couldn't control.

I've been going back and forth to whether or not they should really kiss, because I've gotten good and bad feedback on it. I feel like if he just comforted her with words and a quick hug, that would be more canonical, rather than a full kiss out of the blue. I don't know, I'll just have to get the next chapter up soon though!

I'm so glad you liked my prologue. :)
~MadiMalfoy xx


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