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Review:missclaire17 says:
Hello! I'm here reviewing my OTP!

Can I just say, I think it's brilliant that Lily was sitting there by James's bed in the Hospital Wing just ranting because she had been really worried about him when he threw himself in front of that bludger. Sadly, that moment also reminds me of how brave James will be when he sacrifices his life so that his wife and son can have a chance to escape from Voldemort. Foreshadowing! xD

When James said, "what's life without a little bit of danger" reminds me of that line that Sirius says in OotP. I love how Lily really couldn't understand how winning Quidditch was that important but she was out there supporting him nevertheless. It's such a sweet gesture, to be there even though she didn't get the hype of it all.

When Madam Pomfrey said that James most definitely won't be going, I just cracked up because I can SO imagine her just frowning and thinking how irresponsible and how bad it would be for James to leave the Hospital Wing at all.

Wonderful job! (:

Author's Response: Hi!

This is my OTP too so I'm happy to see a fellow Jily shipper!

Oh I always get sad and feelsy when I think of foreshadowing like that - it wasn't actually intentional here but works well.

I liked that line and can imagine both Sirius and James saying it so I'm glad you agree! I can't imagine Lily ever being up for Quidditch but she'd be there supporting regardless!

James would never stay in the hospital wing now would he? I'm glad Madam Pomfrey worked well though!

Thank so much for stopping by and leaving such a lovely review!

Lauren :)


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