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Review:oldnumberseven says:
Aw, Dumbledore. He's such a cute old man, offering whatever he can! Haha, unintentional rhyme there, go me! The last line of that bit was interesting ... that Rainne knows if she starts cutting, she won't stop. It's the first time I've seen her use some sort of self restraint ... although, I tend to miss things when I read, so correct me if I'm wrong ;)

Hmmm, Ben. I'm intrigued. I actually read another one of the recent reviews for this story and someone asked why you decided to keep Peter out of the story, so I guess I'll ask the same question. Why did you decide to insert Ben into the Marauders instead of letting him be just another house member? Was it because you wanted him know about "Padfoot"?

Also, that scene was so sad. But I totally understand the power of animal therapy so I'm glad it happened. Everyone needs a dog to snuggle when they are feeling depressed :D

And thank you so much for the shout out, but you really didn't need to mention me or my story! So thank you! =)

Author's Response: i was so worried about writing dumbledore, i know he came out too tense, but i know i could never get it right -- especially with the seriousness of this situation, but i'm glad that you liked it :)
several years ago i read a fanfic that did replaced peter with an oc and i quite liked how that turned out. his friendship with the marauders will also play a role later on :)
i know, it was so sad! i hated writing it :( i feel like i'm so mean to rainne but i promise i'm being nice to her in the chapters i'm writing at the moment! yay! snuffles will also be back so don't fret!
i wanted to show how much i appreciate you taking the time to review, it really does mean a lot!
thanks again for reviewing, i can't wait to see what you think of chapter nine! :)

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